Thursday, January 13, 2011

M8-War.....

I awoke being blinded by the sun light of the Greek morning sun. I got out of bed, got myself dressed and headed out the door. I walked down the street and then suddenly a man with a big fury helmet snatched me and we ran down the street. I asked him scared, "What are you doing with me?!" he looked at me and then didn't respond. I was scared. I had no idea where I was going, we ran around a corner and then stopped. We were at a ocean. There was a boat further down the sand. The man held me tighter and he started running again. We hurried on the boat and the people put a helmet and the rest of my gear on. "WAIT! I want to know what is going on! Where am I?"
"Hello Ava Anderson, we are from Greece. You are in a war-" said the leader of the army (Xerxes)
"I am in a war!?
"Yes, you are fighting in the battle of Salamis."
"No! I do not want to fight in a war!"
"I am sorry you  have to, come with me Ava."
"No!"
They grabbed me and placed me down and gave me a spear. Then the ship shook, I knew we were off.
    When we got there we stopped and then a big caboodle of Greeks came over and were kneeling down ready for war. Appearing from the distance I saw a big ship coming toward us. I was terrified. But then my cell phone rang and I picked it up and heard what it said, "Hello Ava Anderson, this is TTI, we hope you are having fun in Greece but we called you because we wanted inform you that you have a special power in your battle. It is a great power to have and you are probably relieved to hear that but you get to have a special invisibility body shield, you may be cut, bleed, knocked down, and get hit and you will not die."
"Thank yo-" But TTI hung up. Then a huge BANG came from no where.  I jumped, yet I forgot that I was in a battle.
I looked up and the big ship had arrived and I noticed that the caboodle of Greeks were throwing spears at the other ship. So I threw one, then a girl came over and she said "Hey" it was Lola Everest. I ignored her because I was focused on the war.
A couple hours later I noticed that the Persians were losing more and more people. Then it was over. I felt so accomplished that now I can say "I have been in a war before, an ancient war..." I got off the ship and when onto the sand, sat down and relaxed.

3 comments:

  1. I really like the way that you used writers secret 2-1

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  2. I like how you didn't realize that you were in a war until the leader of the war told you. That is funny..
    From your friend, Farly Mamba

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  3. I really like your post! Especially the writers secret. ~ZORAH~

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