Now that I am off the long plane ride, I can now relax and find a place to rest. I walk to a store called, "Rent a Chariot" and rode off to a villa. I got in my villa and sat on my mat and thought about my family and friends and how much I miss them. Then a piece of parchment slipped under my door. I looked at it in curiosity, I got up and picked it up. I unrolled it and saw a whole bunch of scribbles on it, then noticed from my earlier learning years (I studied the Rome alphabet) that it was the Roman alphabet! I remember learning about it in college, I know how to read it. I read through it and it said, "Hello Ava Anderson, I would like you to come down to the heart of Rome to help us rebel against the patricians."
So as soon as I read the letter, I walked down to the heart of Rome.
When I got there, their was a group of plebians and one guy stood out which was a blubbery guy who sent me the letter. They had a bunch of people selling signs saying things like: "STOP BEING A PATRICIAN JOIN US!" So I went ahead and bought a sign and headed over to the group of plebians. The blubbery man greeted me and said, "Greetings! Are you ready to rebel?"
"Sure!" I said excitedly.
When the clock ticked to 10 O'clock the rebellion started. Chanting down the street holding torches, signs and spears, it was actually pretty fun. Only the men, who was yelling at the patricians, seemed to be fired up about the rebellion.
Finally after two hours of shouting at each other, the big blubbery guy said something I did not understand, it went on for a long time it felt. After he finished the patricians glared at us and walked off, they were giving up... We cheered and cheered, I walked back to my villa with a scratchy throat.
Nice post I enjoyed your use of blubbery, but you need to underline it. The rest was really good!
ReplyDeleteGood gob on the writers secret!
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I really like your ws. Good job!
ReplyDeleteHaha that is funny how you went to a place called " Rent a Chariot" that is really funny! great job Ava and see you soon
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like your villa was nice, but I'm glad you helped those less fortunate.
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